Did You Ever Poem

Sir Edmund Hillary Biography

My Reflection
I was learning to write a biography about a famous leader.  I think I did okay because I didn't make up information.  My next step is to use past tense not present tense.

Cindy's Biography

My Reflection
First we had a piece of paper that had question that we had to fill in.  Then we give it to another person and that person use your little notes and write a biography about you.  I found it quick easy because her notes were very clear.  My next step is to write it more interesting.

Speech Mark

Did You Ever Poem?

My Reflection
I was learning to write a did you ever poem.  I learnt how to use a thesaurus to find more interesting word.
I found is easy to think of a topic and hard to find word without a thesaurus.  My next step is to not copy other people words.

Glossary

Reflection
I was learning to make a glossary. I found finding to meaning really differcult. The easy part was put it in alphabetical order. My next srep is to work on a harder level.

Idioms for doing

Kensuke's Kingdom

Creative Writing

My Reflection

I think I did well with my creative writing.

My next step it to add more simile.

Creative Writing

INSPIRATIONAL PERSON

Smile Work

Kenning Poem

My Reflection
I think I did well on my kenning poem.The hard part was thinking of what words to use. It was good that I had a thesaurus

WALT- use simple sentences Term 4 2014

CHeck out my reflection

Makeup Speech

My Speech Brainstorm

REFLECTION:
I think I did well because I found lots of information to put into my brainstorm.  Next time I will put all the website address in.

My Acrostic Poem

This is my poem that describes me as a learner.

Metaphor Poem

My antonym diamante poem

I have written a poem about girls and boys.

My Reflection

The three fat sheep and the bear

The three fat sheep and the scary bear

A long long time ago there was a scary, fat, bad bear that was the hungriest bear you ever have seen.  

One spooky,scary night he saw three, enormous, fat sheep wandering around.  Suddenly POP the bear came out.  The fat little sheep ran and ran as fast as they could.  

As they ran away, the first little sheep saw a short weak man that had banana and apple.  The first little sheep made a house out of the apples and bananas.

The second fat sheep saw lots of sour lollies and he made them into a lolly house.  

The third fat sheep built a house out of hard brick .

The scary bear went and saw the first little fat sheep’s house made out of banana and apples.  He said “LET ME COME IN.”  The fat sheep said, “No, no, no, not by the hair on my chinny chin chin.  The scary bear huffed and puffed and blew the house that was made out of banana and apples down. The first little sheep ran into the second sheeps house.

 

Later he saw the second sheep in the lolly house and he said “LET ME COME IN.”  The fat sheep said, “no, no, no not by hair on my chinny chin chin.”  The scary bear huffed and puffed and blew the sour lolly house down.  The first and second  little sheep ran into the third sheeps house.

Before long he went to the third fat sheep and said “LET ME COME IN.” The fat sheep said, “no, no, no not by the hair on my chinny  chin chin.”  The scary bear huffed and  puffed and huffed and puffed and ….... couldn’t blow down the house.  

Then he went far far away.  He was never found again.  

The three little sheep know not to wander again.

MY WRITING REFLECTION